Breaking Free from Amateur Writing Mistakes

Have you ever picked up a book only to groan at the unnecessary setup for a phone call? You know, the precise details about Janice walking to the phone, punching in numbers with her index finger, and waiting for Ann to pick up? Ugh, we've all been there. Let's put an end to that, shall we?
And what about those scenes where characters exchange pleasantries with receptionists? *Yawn.*

As Janice entered the reception area outside Ann's office, she approached the desk where a man sat. "Hi there," she greeted him warmly. "I'm Janice Smith, here for a meeting with Ann Jones. She's been expecting me."
The man nodded politely. "Just a moment, please," he said, reaching for his phone.
After a brief exchange with the person on the other end, he turned back to Janice with a smile. "Mrs. Jones is ready to see you now," he said, gesturing towards the office door.

Avoid getting bogged down in mundane details like office introductions—they're the fastest way to slow down your story's momentum.
Let's delve into the concept of pacing. Over-describing mundane activities can quickly derail a story's momentum. We're not here for Janice's leisurely walk to the phone or polite conversation with a receptionist. We crave action, drama, and intrigue!
When it comes to writing, keep in mind that less is often more. Trim the unnecessary, cut the excess, and focus on the essence. Your readers will relish the dynamic narrative. So, the next time you're tempted to indulge in unnecessary details, remember that pacing is crucial, and brevity is your trusted companion.