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Have you ever picked up a book only to groan at the unnecessary setup for a phone call? You know, the precise details about Janice walking to the phone, punching in numbers with her index finger, and waiting for Ann to pick up? Ugh, we've all been there. Let's put an end to that, shall we?
And what about those scenes where characters exchange pleasantries with receptionists? *Yawn.* As Janice entered the reception area outside Ann's office, she approached the desk where a man sat. "Hi there," she greeted him warmly. "I'm Janice Smith, here for a meeting with Ann Jones. She's been expecting me." The man nodded politely. "Just a moment, please," he said, reaching for his phone. After a brief exchange with the person on the other end, he turned back to Janice with a smile. "Mrs. Jones is ready to see you now," he said, gesturing towards the office door. Avoid getting bogged down in mundane details like office introductions—they're the fastest way to slow down your story's momentum. Let's delve into the concept of pacing. Over-describing mundane activities can quickly derail a story's momentum. We're not here for Janice's leisurely walk to the phone or polite conversation with a receptionist. We crave action, drama, and intrigue! When it comes to writing, keep in mind that less is often more. Trim the unnecessary, cut the excess, and focus on the essence. Your readers will relish the dynamic narrative. So, the next time you're tempted to indulge in unnecessary details, remember that pacing is crucial, and brevity is your trusted companion.
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Ever felt like your story's stuck in a rut, despite all the action-packed scenes? You're not alone. Creating drama doesn't automatically mean your plot's moving forward.
Scott Eyman, a film critic, once said, "Action has become confused with movement." He nailed it. It's like mistaking a car chase for actual plot development. Ouch. Sometimes, you've gotta be ruthless. If a scene doesn't serve your plot, it's time to bid it adieu. Faulkner said it best: sometimes, you gotta "kill your babies." Brutal, but true. And it's not just about dialogue or exposition. Even the most action-packed scenes can fall flat if they're not pushing the story forward. In books, just like in movies, pointless scenes leave us scratching our heads. But here's the kicker: filmmakers have it easy. They can fix a scene with a few edits. In a novel, a lull can cost you readers. That's why every word must propel the plot forward. Bottom line? Cut the fluff, focus on the plot. It's tough love, but your story will thank you for it. In anticipation of my new book's launch, I have an exciting announcement for all fans of sci-fi/fantasy books: you have the chance to win 10 best-sellers in the genre! Simply click 'Learn More' and enter for a chance to win these fantastic reads.
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