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Backstory (Flashback) in a Narrative–Three Effective Techniques Other Than Dialogue

2/6/2024

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Hey there, fellow storytellers! Let’s delve into a fascinating aspect of our writer’s toolbox: backstory, or as we often know it, flashbacks. You know, those brief glimpses into a character’s past that make them feel real and relatable? While dialogue is a classic way to drop those nuggets of history, let’s embark on a journey to explore some fresh, exciting techniques to bring that backstory to life without relying on chatty characters.

1. Paint a Picture with Visual Imagery and Symbolism
Have you ever heard the saying, “A picture is worth a thousand words”? A well-painted picture can tell an entire backstory in writing. Instead of spelling out past events, use vivid descriptions and symbols to hint at what happened.

Example: Picture this: our hero, Alex, is haunted by a childhood fire. Instead of a lengthy dialogue explaining it, every time Alex sees a flickering candle, he flinches and his heart races. Maybe he avoids barbecue gatherings because the smell of smoke churns his stomach. Through these reactions, the story hints at his traumatic past, making readers piece together his history from these visual breadcrumbs. It’s like giving them a mini-mystery to solve!

2. Dive into Memory Lane with Internal Monologue
Let’s get inside our character’s head for a bit. Internal monologue is like eavesdropping on someone’s thoughts, and it’s a goldmine for backstory. Memories pop up, uninvited and sometimes inconveniently, giving readers a direct line to the past.

Example: Imagine your character, Sarah, walking through her old neighbourhood. She sees the park where she scraped her knee while playing soccer and the corner store where she used to buy her favourite candy. As she walks, memories flood back—she recalls the smell of fresh grass, the sting of that scrape, and the joy of unwrapping a candy bar after school. Suddenly, she’s not just strolling down the street; she’s reliving moments that shaped her. It’s personal, intimate, and a great way to weave backstory into the present narrative.

3. Unearth History with Environmental Cues and Artifacts
Our surroundings hold stories, like a treasure chest waiting to be opened. Using environmental cues and artefacts, we can reveal a character’s past in a natural and immersive way.

Example: Think about a character, Jake, revisiting his childhood home. Every creaky floorboard and dusty photo album tells a story. Maybe he finds an old journal filled with teenage angst or a letter from a long-lost friend. As Jake flips through the journal’s pages, he’s transported back to those high school days—the crushes, the struggles, and the dreams. These artefacts act like time machines, taking Jake and the reader back in time. It’s a hands-on history lesson that doesn’t feel like one, making the backstory come alive without a single word of dialogue.

Wrapping It Up
So, here are three fun and creative ways to sprinkle backstory into your narrative. By using visual imagery and symbolism, delving into internal monologues, and unearthing environmental cues and artefacts, you can add depth and richness to your characters’ histories. These techniques make your story more engaging and invite readers to become part of the storytelling process.

Now, it’s your turn to experiment with these techniques in your own storytelling. Who knows? You might discover a new, exciting way to share your characters’ pasts. Happy writing!
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