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This post is part 6 of a short series on story structure for fiction writers—practical, straightforward, and designed to help you build stories that actually work.
Most writers assume a story fails because of:
But very often, the real problem appears much earlier. Long before the writing itself. The story is trying to be the wrong kind of story This happens constantly. A writer begins with one type of story in mind… …but gradually starts pulling it toward something else. A thriller becomes reflective and introspective. A character drama suddenly starts behaving like an action story. A mystery pauses every few pages to explore philosophical themes. None of these elements are bad on their own. The problem is that the story’s core identity becomes unclear. And readers can usually feel that, even if they can’t explain why. When a story fights itself One of the clearest warning signs is this: 👉 the story feels strangely difficult to write Not because writing is always easy, of course. But because the story keeps resisting its own direction. You find yourself constantly asking:
…and another part wants something completely different. A common example Imagine a writer starts with a strong thriller premise: A detective hunts a serial killer across northern Europe. Clear enough. But halfway through, the writer becomes more interested in the detective’s emotional wounds and inner life. The story slows down. Long reflective passages appear. The investigation loses urgency. Now, this can work brilliantly—if the story shifts intentionally toward character drama. But if the plot still expects thriller pacing while the writing wants introspection, the story starts pulling in two directions at once. The reader experiences this as: 👉 loss of momentum Stories usually need a dominant focus Most successful stories contain multiple elements:
That dominant focus acts like a compass. Without it, the story can start wandering. The danger of trying to do everything This is especially common among newer writers. There’s a temptation to include:
And while technically possible… …it often weakens the main narrative drive. Readers don’t usually need more in a story. They need clarity. Sometimes the story itself tells you what it wants This is the interesting part. Stories often begin behaving better once the writer recognises their true type. You may discover: 👉 the story isn’t really about the conspiracy 👉 it’s about grief Or: 👉 it isn’t truly a romance 👉 it’s a transformation story wearing romantic clothes Once that becomes clear, decisions suddenly become easier:
This doesn’t mean stories must fit neat boxes Stories overlap constantly. A science fiction novel might also be:
The problem only appears when the story lacks a clear centre of gravity. Readers instinctively feel story type Even if they’ve never studied structure, readers unconsciously understand what kind of experience they’ve been promised. If a story begins as: 👉 a tense mystery …the reader expects:
Not because the writing is bad. Because the story no longer feels aligned with itself. A useful question to ask If your story feels difficult or unfocused, try asking: 👉 What does this story care about most? Is it:
The good news This problem is surprisingly fixable. Many struggling stories improve dramatically once the writer simply recognises: 👉 what kind of story they’re actually telling Sometimes that means:
Final thought Stories rarely collapse because the idea itself is weak. More often, they fail because the story is trying to move in several directions at once. Once you understand the type of story you’re telling, the rest of the structure becomes much easier to build around it. If you’d like the full guide when it’s finished, you can join my email list here. I’ll send you a copy when it’s ready. Next week: The 14 Story Types Explained (Without the Confusion)
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This post is part 5 of a short series on story structure for fiction writers—practical, straightforward, and designed to help you build stories that actually work.
One of the reasons stories go wrong is this: The writer hasn’t quite decided what kind of story they’re telling. Not the genre—that’s something else. You can know you’re writing:
And that uncertainty tends to show up as:
So what do we mean by “type of story”? At a very simple level, most stories fall into one of three broad types: 👉 Plot-driven 👉 Character-driven 👉 Theme-driven (Epic) These aren’t rigid categories. They’re more like… different centres of gravity. They tell you where the weight of your story sits. 1. Plot-driven stories (what happens) In a plot-driven story, the main focus is: 👉 the action Something needs to be done, solved, reached, escaped, or survived. The story moves because:
Example (simplified) A detective solves a major crime despite overwhelming obstacles. The focus is outward. 👉 What happens next is the driving force. 2. Character-driven stories (what changes) In a character-driven story, the focus shifts inward. 👉 What matters most is the change within the character The events of the story still matter—but they exist largely to:
👉 Who does this person become? Example (simplified) A lonely man learns to connect with others despite his fear of rejection. Same kind of setup. Very different emphasis. 3. Theme-driven stories (what it means) This is where things become more abstract. In an epic or theme-driven story, the focus is: 👉 the idea behind the story The narrative becomes a way of exploring something larger:
Example (simplified) Love is stronger than death. Here, the story exists to demonstrate something. The important part: these can overlap Most stories aren’t purely one thing. A thriller might also explore:
👉 one element dominates And that’s what gives the story its clarity. Where writers get into trouble Problems tend to appear when the story is pulled in different directions. For example:
👉 a story that feels slightly out of sync with itself A quick way to check your own story Try asking yourself: 👉 What matters most in this story? Is it:
Why this matters more than it sounds Once you know your story’s type, a lot becomes clearer:
You don’t have to get it perfect This isn’t about locking yourself into a category. It’s about: 👉 recognising the direction your story wants to go Once you see that, you can:
Final thought Stories don’t usually fall apart because the idea is bad. They fall apart because the story is trying to be two things at once—and not quite succeeding at either. A little clarity about the type of story you’re telling can solve that. If you’d like the full guide when it’s finished, you can join my email list here. I’ll send you a copy when it’s ready. Next week: The 14 Story Types Explained (Without the Confusion) This post is part 4 of a short series on story structure for fiction writers—practical, straightforward, and designed to help you build stories that actually work.
There’s a question that tends to come up as soon as structure enters the conversation: “Can I break the rules?” The short answer is: 👉 Yes. The slightly longer answer is: 👉 Yes—but it helps to know what you’re breaking, and why. First: structure isn’t really a set of rules It’s easy to think of story structure as something imposed from outside. A list of steps you’re supposed to follow. But in practice, structure is more like a pattern that’s been observed over time. Writers didn’t invent it to control stories. They noticed that stories which work well tend to share certain features:
That’s a description of what tends to happen when a story feels complete. So what does it mean to “break” structure? Usually, it means one of three things:
But they don’t work automatically. Breaking structure deliberately vs accidentally This is where things tend to go wrong. There’s a big difference between: 👉 deliberate choice and 👉 things just not quite working If a story:
That’s structure missing. When breaking structure actually works It tends to work best when the writer: 1. Understands the underlying shape They know what the story would look like if it followed a more traditional path. Which means when they change something, it’s intentional. 2. Has a clear reason They’re not breaking structure for the sake of it. They’re doing it to:
3. Replaces one form of structure with another Even experimental stories usually have some form of organisation. It might be:
A simple example Imagine a story where:
Now imagine a story that deliberately avoids escalation—perhaps to reflect a character stuck in a static, repetitive life. Same surface result. Very different intention. One feels incomplete. The other feels purposeful. Why most writers shouldn’t worry about breaking rules (yet) This might sound slightly blunt, but it’s useful: 👉 Most problems beginners face aren’t caused by too much structure. They’re caused by too little. Before worrying about breaking structure, it helps to:
👉 what to keep 👉 what to adjust 👉 what you can safely ignore Structure gives you something to push against This is where it becomes genuinely useful. If you know the shape of a story, you can:
You’re just guessing. You don’t have to choose one approach Some stories:
What matters is that the story feels: 👉 intentional 👉 coherent 👉 complete Final thought You can absolutely break story structure. Just don’t do it blindly. Structure isn’t there to confine you—it’s there to give you something solid to work from. And once you have that, you can take your story in almost any direction you like. If you’d like the full guide when it’s finished, you can join my email list here. I’ll send you a copy when it’s ready. ✍️ A Quick Note Good grammar is only part of what makes writing work. Many manuscripts are technically correct—but still feel flat, repetitive, or slightly off. That’s usually a question of voice and flow. This often happens in AI-assisted drafts, but it’s just as common in human writing. If you’re working on something and feel it isn’t quite there yet, you’re welcome to send me a short sample. I’ll take a look and let you know what I see. 👉 [Send Me a Sample] Next week: How to Choose the Right Type of Story (Plot vs Character vs Epic) This post is part 3 of a short series on story structure for fiction writers—practical, straightforward, and designed to help you build stories that actually work.
There’s a moment most writers recognise. You start with a good idea. A strong opening, perhaps. A character you quite like. Things move along nicely for a while… And then, somewhere in the middle, everything begins to drift. The story slows down. Scenes feel disconnected. The ending becomes… uncertain. At this point, many writers assume the problem is: 👉 lack of talent 👉 lack of ideas 👉 lack of discipline In reality, it’s usually something much simpler. The real problem isn’t writing—it’s shape Beginners often approach a story as a series of moments:
But without an underlying structure, those moments don’t naturally connect. You end up with:
Why structure feels unnatural at first If you’re new to it, structure can feel like:
Writers think: “I’ll just write and see where it goes.” And sometimes that works—for a while. But eventually, most stories need direction. The middle is where things fall apart Beginnings are easy. They’re full of possibility. Endings—strangely—aren’t too bad either. Even if they’re rough, you can usually sense what you’re aiming for. The difficulty sits in the middle. That long stretch where:
👉 repetitive 👉 unfocused 👉 padded Or simply… vague. A lack of structure doesn’t look like chaos This is worth noting. A story without structure doesn’t usually look wildly broken. It often looks:
You tweak sentences. Adjust dialogue. Add scenes. But the real issue sits underneath. Structure gives you direction, not restriction This is the shift that helps most beginners. Structure isn’t there to tell you what to write. It’s there to help you understand:
You still choose:
A small example Let’s say you’ve written 20,000 words. Your character has:
👉 What has changed? 👉 What is building? 👉 Where is this going? …and the answers aren’t clear-- That’s structure quietly missing. What beginners actually need Not complexity. Not a full outline. Not a rigid system. Just: 👉 a sense that stories move in stages 👉 a sense that each part leads to the next 👉 a sense that things are building That alone is often enough to turn:
You don’t have to plan everything It’s worth saying this clearly. You don’t need to:
But once you’re aware of it, you can:
Final thought If you’ve ever felt stuck halfway through a story, it’s unlikely to be a lack of imagination. More often, it’s the absence of something quietly holding everything together. Structure doesn’t make writing easier in the sense of effort. But it does make it clearer. And clarity, more than anything, is what most stories are missing. If you’d like the full guide when it’s finished, you can join my email list here. I’ll send you a copy when it’s ready. Next week: Can You Break Story Structure Rules? (And When It Works) This post nr.2. It is part of a short series on story structure for fiction writers—practical, straightforward, and designed to help you build stories that actually work.
Let’s start with the question most writers don’t want to ask out loud: If all stories follow the same structure… doesn’t that make them predictable? It’s a fair concern. No one sits down to write a novel thinking, Right—time to follow a template. And yet, if you step back and look at the stories we love—across genres, styles, and centuries—you start to notice something slightly unsettling. They’re different on the surface. But underneath? They’re often doing remarkably similar things. So… do all stories follow the same structure? 👉 Not exactly. But close enough to matter. Most stories don’t follow a rigid blueprint. But they do tend to move through a recognisable shape:
Not because writers are copying each other—but because it works. Why this pattern keeps appearing Stories aren’t just entertainment. They’re a way of making sense of change. Something starts one way… something happens… and by the end, something is different. That’s structure at its most basic. And it mirrors how we experience life:
Same structure, very different stories Here’s the part that matters. Two stories can share the same underlying structure and feel completely different. Take these:
And yet, all three might follow the same broad pattern:
It’s:
Where the confusion comes from Writers often hear “structure” and think: 👉 rigid formula 👉 predictable beats 👉 paint-by-numbers storytelling And yes—if you apply structure badly, that can happen. But that’s not structure’s fault. That’s like blaming a map for a dull journey. A map doesn’t tell you what to see. It just stops you getting lost. Structure is shape, not detail This is the key idea to hold onto: 👉 Structure gives you shape, not content It doesn’t decide:
What happens without it You can write without structure. Many people do. But the risks are familiar:
A quick thought experiment Imagine telling someone about your story. If you say: “Things happen, and then more things happen…” It probably needs structure. If you can say: “This happens, which forces this, which leads to this…” Now you’ve got momentum. That chain of cause and effect is structure in action. So… should you follow it? 👉 Yes—but lightly. You don’t need to:
Final thought Stories don’t all follow the same structure because they have to. They follow it because, over time, writers have discovered that this shape helps stories feel complete. You can ignore it. You can bend it. You can occasionally break it. But it’s worth knowing it’s there—quietly doing its job—before you decide to do without it. Next week: Why Beginners Struggle Without Story Structure If you’d like the full guide when it’s finished, you can join my email list here. I’ll send you a copy when it’s ready. This post is part one of a short series on story structure for fiction writers—practical, straightforward, and designed to help you build stories that actually work.
Let me start with a slightly uncomfortable truth. Most stories don’t fail because of bad writing. They fail because the writer didn’t quite know where the story was going. I’ve done it myself more times than I’d care to admit. You start with a good idea, a strong opening, maybe even a character you quite like… and then somewhere around page thirty, things begin to drift. The middle sags. The ending feels rushed. Characters behave oddly, as if they’ve lost interest in their own lives. And you sit there thinking, This was going so well. What happened? So… what are “Story Creation Steps”?Put simply, they’re the underlying stages that most stories naturally follow. Not rules. Not formulas. More like… signposts. They describe the journey your story takes:
Different genres dress them differently, of course—but underneath, the shape is surprisingly consistent. But aren’t we supposed to write freely?Yes. Absolutely. No one wants to feel like they’re filling in a form. But here’s the thing most people don’t tell you: 👉 Even writers who “write freely” are usually following a structure—whether they realise it or not. They’ve just internalised it over time. If you haven’t, writing without structure can feel a bit like setting off on a long walk without a map. You might discover something interesting… or you might end up going in circles. Why these steps actually help (rather than restrict)There’s a fear that structure will make your story predictable. In practice, the opposite tends to happen. Structure doesn’t dictate what happens in your story—it supports how it unfolds. Think of it like this:
With it, even a simple idea can become something compelling. A familiar pattern (whether you notice it or not)Most stories—whether consciously planned or not—tend to move through something like this:
You’ve probably felt it working when a story pulls you along effortlessly. That’s structure doing its job quietly in the background. Where writers tend to struggleNot at the beginning. Beginnings are easy. They’re full of promise. The trouble usually starts in the middle:
Not because the writer lacks talent—but because the story doesn’t yet have a clear shape. A quick exampleLet’s say you’re writing a thriller. You introduce a detective. There’s a crime. All good so far. But if you don’t have a sense of the underlying steps:
This isn’t about rigid rulesIt’s worth saying this clearly: 👉 You don’t have to follow every step perfectly. 👉 You don’t have to plan everything in advance. What these steps give you is awareness. Once you can see the shape of a story, you can:
If you’ve ever felt “stuck” mid-story…There’s a good chance it wasn’t a lack of ideas. It was a lack of structure holding those ideas together. That’s what we’re going to fix in this series. Not by turning writing into a rigid process—but by giving you just enough framework to keep your story moving forward. Final thoughtStory Creation Steps aren’t there to control your writing. They’re there to support it. Like a good walking stick—you don’t always notice it when things are going well, but you’re very glad it’s there when the ground gets uneven. Next week: Do All Stories Follow the Same Structure? (Mostly, Yes) I’m gradually turning this series into a complete guide. If you’d like a free copy when it’s finished, you can join my email list here. |
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